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📝 Task 2 essay submitted — 274 words
Remote work has changed how companies think about offices. In my view, this shift brings more benefits than problems…
Task answer
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Structure
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Word choice
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Grammar
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Overall 6.5Fix first:
A tutor takes days. This takes seconds — scored on the same four things examiners look at.
📄 “Some people think working from home is better. Discuss both sides.”
copied from the promptno clear position taken
AI examiner reading your opening
2 band-capping traps
Your first sentence already predicts your band. Catch the traps before you write the other 250 words.
🧑⚖️ You be the examiner — which sentence scores higher?
Sentence A
“The proliferation of vehicular conveyances engenders deleterious ramifications for the atmosphere.”
9.0wrong word use ✕
Sentence B
“More cars on the road are making air pollution worse in most big cities.”
0.0clear & precise ✓
Myth busted
95% of Band 9 language is basic English used accurately. Complexity you can’t control costs points — it never earns them.
🔍 Put the pen down. Read the prompt in three layers first.
the general topicSome people think children should start learning a foreign language in primary school.the specific angleOthers believe secondary school is soon enough.your instructionDiscuss both views and give your own opinion.
¶1 Your position — answer the instruction in one line
¶2 View one + your example
¶3 View two + why you still hold your position
Band 5 essays are written by people who read the prompt in 5 seconds. Three layers, three paragraphs — the plan writes itself.
🔁 Two targeted rewrites from your last essay:
Pollution is a big problem in nowadaysthese days.
“nowadays” never takes “in” — this exact slip appeared 3× in your essay.
The government should make a researchdo research on cleaner fuel.
“research” is uncountable — collocation fix worth half a band.
6.0band after rewrites
Not generic tips — your sentences, upgraded. Every rewrite is tied to the rubric point it repairs.